Tales of Crocodiles Lake: A lonely white fish
Ahmed Zakaria
Sep 2020 · Ahmed Zakaria
4.6star
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57
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In A dark black Lake, where bigger fishes eats smaller ones, there is no hope for small fishes but there dark skin that can help them to hide, drack grays and even black fishes used to live there, and when a small egg is hatched, through a small tiny little fish, and white!! what chance it may have, fishes of the lake named it "kikar" for they supposed it will be the most easy catch, but that not what happened, it lived more than all!!, for "kikar" has its own secret never told any about!! did it??
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4.6
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Teha Rashid
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July 15, 2023
The story was amazing but it was very badly written. Wrong words, misspelled words, bad grammar, awkward sentence structures, repetitive words, among others. If it weren't for the fact I was reading out loud to my kids and corrected it as I went along, I wouldn't even have gotten past the first chapter, which would have been a waste because the story itself was wonderful. It was emotional, gripping, and the ending was absolutely heart wrenching and bittersweet. If you could just get an editor to go through it and make it read better, this story has so much potential. I'm speaking from the POV of a writer, editor and reader.
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May 24, 2023
loved it
Khalid Rehan
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October 26, 2020
Hidden treasure
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About the author
Born in Cairo, Architect, illustrator, Professor in Ain shams University, Historian, and author of many fancy novels include, tales of crocodiles lake
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