Billionaire Chase

The four stars are a response to the multiple grammatical errors and my unwillingness to suspend disbelief. Neither one is a deal breaker but both are annoying enough to interrupt the smooth flow of reading. The grammar consists primarily of confusion of the verb forms of to lie (down) and to lay (down.) Lie forms are active; lay forms are passive. They do both use lay but lay is the past tense of to lie and the present tense of to lay. You cannot lay yourself down. I felt the ending was contrived. I just cannot believe the superior of the local kingpin would allow two Innocents to walk after experiencing interaction with such high level individuals. Outside of these bumps in the road, the book was well-written, the plot intricate and clearly developed, and the characters relatable and fully realized. I enjoyed it despite my usual distaste for reading crime novels.

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