Michelle Lancour-Latour
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There were alot of typographical errors. There were times where I read almost the exact same sentence or sequence of words in the same chapter. Just seems like there's a better way author could have used to set the scene without the repetition. I like the premise of the story and the authors ideas for stories/books! I'm on to the last book in series, thank god! As you can read I'm NOT A FAN, AT ALL of turning what should be ONE BOOK into Three books with around 200pgs!!! Just write ONE book even if it takes more time and isn't as profitable in the beginning you will GAIN Readership because 99.9% of Readers HATE SERIES!! Here I go to read the ending book (last few chapters of what should be ONE Book)!