Dmitriy Garmatyuk
To me, it read as a mash-up of "evil house/another dimension" stories and movies I've read/watched before. Of course, The Shining comes to mind, as well as 1408, the cartoon Coraline, etc. I don't know what would make a writer do something like this, other than an exercise in reheating someone else's dish and garnishing it with a semi-fresh herb sprig here and drop of a faux-luxe (but really canned) sauce there. Pretentious, often boring, hugely predictable, self-servingly dramatic, but ultimately climax-less (a classic cop-out of a lazy writer: Finish with something akin to a dark screen at the end of Sopranos). Just meh in the end.
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Jack Dziatkowiec
Loved the fragmented writing. Perfect for someone with a short attention
span. Confusing at first, and poetic at times, but intriguing till the end.
Very cool spin on the haunted house story.
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