Flovely - Adventures on the Houseboat

I've only read the first cupple of pages and thought as others have said the grammar is not of the best it may help readers if they read it in a Welch accent . I think that it was written as the writer speaks if it's not with a Welch accent then please expect my apologies . Easy to be critical if you have never written Anything

The typos and the questionable grammar were far too distracting while I was trying to read it with my niece. If you can ignore the typos, then the story is okay, but if you have trouble reading typos and choppy flowing sentences, I would pass on this.

This is a poorly written story, unfortunately. It has not targeted a reading level, with the language being used and the concepts in the story being mismatched for young readers. Maybe a rewrite is required. Good luck!