Ken
Horrible writing. Also a major downer. The characters are really difficult to try to relate to and they keep doing and saying things that flatly contradict what they have said and done before. The biggest problem with the story is that everything is either way over the top, or pointlessly subdued. The characters just never react in a plausible way. I hated reading this.... It was painful to push through.
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jammin12 2
Terrible writing. You know how when you have to stretch out an essay to reach a page length you just repeat everything but using different words? Well imagine that in a book form but anytime something is repeated it takes up 6 pages of just nonsense to say what most writers can convey in a sentence. Characters will also randomly change their traits to fit the story just outta nowhere. And whenever there's an argument one of the characters, no matter how smart they may be, will become inexplicably dumb and not be able to utter any words other than "no" and "you're wrong" because who cares about good writing and believable characters. Honestly don't even come here for the fights or overpowered mc because when something cool is happening the author decides that the characters backstory needs to be retold in 8 more pages but with one new piece of info. It's insanely boring to read so don't bother.
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Adam Thompson
"I'm sorry, I didn't quite catch that ... Could you repeat that?" Repetition to get your word count is a high school essay trick....
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