Jaded

Missed words, wrong homonyms, incomplete sentences, choppy and very repetitive story line and descriptions, ie: waggling eyebrows, smirked, laughed. Shuddered, growled, moaned from a look or a few words? After painting, how did his friend get to the house? What happened to the muffins rising in the laundry room the house didn't have? You know, open floor plan with loft bedroom. Where are the other 2 bedrooms? The description puts the porch and bay on the same side as the front door. Proof Read ; )

I liked this story, two people drawn together. Its not story that so different but yet it was refreshing. If a spouse or boyfriend/girlfriend to be cheated on you, you can relate to both Jake and Kari's feelings. I found it refreshing that the two didn't deny themselves a chance at love by holding on to the past but grasped at the chance to love again.

the writing style didn't work for me. While there was good tension in the story wondering how things would turn out, some of the grammar and phrases seemed odd thus making it less enjoyable for me.