barb mchenry
The structure was there. The characters were constructed. Although, telling your audience that your characters are characters is slightly skipping development... The story line was there. The plot, however, was disjointed. The chapter breaks were missing in places, so you had to re-read. The incidental plot of illness, read like a Wikipedia entry. There were typos- jamb for jam - for example that was distracting. But the most irksome plot point was the relationship between Rachel and Joe. A couple together that long, simply wouldn't shut each other out. There were such good ideas here, but they just didn't work.
Corin Newson
this story was very delightful and interesting. Joe and Rachel had their ups and downs like everyone else , on top of all that happened in the building . Everyone thought they had the right person for the murder so it was a total shock to all to find out who the murderer was . Good job on a great book
Vi Cash
This one was a little slow. The murder tale was a little lacking in excitement. I really didn't think religion and murder go together in a book. There wasn't any indication at the beginning to the religion part being added in. I guess for some, this would be ok. I'm not anti religion, just don't want to mix it with my relaxing reading.