Blood Magic : Divided Realms Book 3

I wish there were more details woven in this whole 3 book series, except for the many times the line "bile rose in my throat" which was overused so much i began to highlight it every time i came accross it. I count 8+ times mentioned in this book alone. I also highlighted so many simple grammatical errors (15+] that a live person such as an editor could catch easily, but spellcheck wouldnt, i suspect the latter was used in place of the former. It cheapened amd devalued the whole series for me to know they didnt bother to spell check all 3 books! The storyline was very interesting as well as the subject matter, if the aforementioned issues were fixed i would highly recommend. Only two stars though, the author needs a better editor :( Had great potential

It had so much potential. Good characters and story but too slow. The characters talked in depth about things that there was no need. Could have been amazing.

Awesome Want a sequel for kids like be the first to have twins with a male and girl with different gifts one a steel maiden and other blood magic lose of spouse gets with the king