Muff Schnuff
After the first two books, that showed how much of a master of layering - of plots within plots - Pacat can be, this installment was a major letdown. There were too many inconsistencies, too many things that didn't add up right in the end. Also nothing took me by surprise in the least and the end was so anti- climatic, it didn't feel right after all the built-up. Also getting published should mean grammar and spelling are increased, which didn't happen. The first two book still belong to my favourites, probably always will, but this one? Well, lets just say it could have been done better. Especially if you think about how long we waited for the third book. I think this is exactly the reason why online novels shouldn't get published, at least not til they are finished. The pressure of getting published often puts a downer to authors writings. I've seen this happen so many times already, I can't count it anymore. It's a pity, really ...