Ronda Matney
It's hard to read books with grammatical errors, spelling errors, and simple punctuation errors that the proof-reader should have seen. My review has NO bearing upon the author what so ever, but upon the proof-reader & the publishing house for not double checking to make sure the book/set would be engaging for all reader, including adults with more than a high school education.
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The writing was enjoyable overall and the characters were likable, just not always believable.Dectective.Deluca has very good instincts about mother who would have thought that she would have ended up being this back stabber that you wouldn't even guess her out to be. This book does end with a big cliffhanger.. At first I though it was cop rescues innocent girl but the story turned the other way. The biker romance. I think it had situations that can be related to in everyday life.
Danielle H
Love all of your books but your spelling and grammar are awful. If you have someone who proof reads your books before they are published, get rid of them. The same word repeats itself or a word is in place of another one (like their for they) so confusing having to place in your own words as you read. Apart from that 5 stars :) xx
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