My Status as an Assassin Obviously Exceeds the Hero's (Light Novel)

the editors really need to reexamine themselves. There are so many grammar errors, commas I'm weird places and paragraphs starting mid sentence. It threw me off pretty bad. I also found myself just skimming at points. Too much fluff irrelevant to the main story.

After finishing the first book I will admit I thought I knew what to expect from the author when it came to writing style, but I was woefully unprepared for what I found here. if the first book was simply 'rushed' this one was only half finished. The characters take actions that the author doesn't even bother explaining. In the end I was not able to even finish this book due to how poor its quality is.

The first book was decent, but I'm having trouble even finishing this book. I keep finding myself skimming to get past various absurdities. It's like reading the fantasies of a 5 year old that's constantly changing their mind. I mean at least be consistent with how the rules of the world work, huh? And try to be at least vaguely realistic as to how someone might react to a given situation. "Oh, the villain who is literally in the middle of wronging me asked me about my sister? Let me give him her full history including all of her emotional vulnerabilities." Makes sense.