Nancy Maitland
Not the book that was expected. The writeup had to be to another book. The story is okay, I have never been into stupid women that have to be strong and independent to the point they were stupid.Even though the words were there you could not feel any emotion tied to anyone. It was all flat with words. Hard to describe.
Yoliswa Magalela
I found a disconnect between the storyline and synopsis of the book. I read it anyway with all the grammatical errors and spelling making me shake my head a lot! It was a good story nonetheless, I cried at all the cruelty that Ari encountered and laughed at her silliness with her friend on their drinking sprees. The author could invest in proofreading.
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Grey Amore
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description of book versus reality of book: 2 VERY VERY different things. I don't see how the two could be any more different. the description sounds good yet the book is not at all similar. different names of characters and vastly different settings. it can't be the same book, there is no way. Spelling? there is at least one or more spelling mistakes per page.Grammar? its tolerable. I am not perfect either but someone did NOT proof read this before publication, or did not do so well. but the spelling is all over the place. "mist" instead of "must". Sentences that are cut off and continued without making sense. At times it seems the point of view changes between sentences without any structure to indicate that it happened. The structure of the book (sentences, spacing, paragraph structure, etc) makes it hard on the eyes if using a eReader/nonphysical-book-copy format. can you read it? yes. do I recommend it? no. True summary? guy meets girl and girl situation is Cinderella similar.
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