David N
The drawings are great. Silk doesn't have enough character depth though. Her story feels like an asset flip. Basically, just replace Spiderman with a female. The problem isn't the gender change at all, though. It's that the story feels forced, and the background of the character isn't grounded or shall I say, it doesn't stay in your mind for long. If she was born around 1997 - 2001, then there's a lot of historical precedent for why she could be adopted, for example. Just... it would be nice if she was a character that the reader can see themselves in or someone close to them and made fantastical from that point forward.