Debbie Pden
The storyline is good. Characters have personality. There was good conversation and some banter. For some reason I felt as though I wanted to hear more from the characters that were introduced at the beginning of the book. The five brothers, we only interacted with two basically, the oldest and the youngest. This book is basically about the oldest brother..maybe that's all the three books are about..anyway not really a HEA..left hanging..not a fan of having to buy two more books to get an answer to will she or won't she.. :-( !! Let me know.
J Cee
This story doesn't need 3 books to be told. I figured each book would be about a different brother, nope 😡 Book 1 needs proof reading, there are many mistakes and extra words in wrong places which is ironic since the story takes place in a publishing office. It is only just over 200 pages so it's more of a booklet really, part 2 and 3 are just a cash grab. The story is predictable and a waste of time to purchase and read in 3 parts, I will not be continuing with parts 2 and 3.
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lihle dlamini
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Too much unrealistic begging by a rich,handsome,kind giving guy.I get that Ella was hurt from a previous relationship but that was too much ,especially since she fell for Josh too.Oh yah ,,,there's no happy ending as this is book one which ends just when you think finally ,the relationship is going somewhere! I wish I had known that so I don't start reading this book!
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