Secret Baby Billionaire

This book has so much potential to be smashing. It misses the mark in character development as lots of things are hinted at, but not explored like the main characters' back stories. Editing is shoddy and the writing skips sometimes making you wonder if you missed something. It was free so not complaining about that; just left me feeling vaguely dissatisfied.

I am a massive sucker for romance novel, and this story had some great potential, tho here is where i think it got let down a little. The editing in this book is terrible, how did they not pick some of these mistakes up, eg at the start of the book they are on a couch then some how on a bed then back to the couch (i dont think a bed was ever meant to be mention), with no description of how they were getting there, extremely choppy writting. Then there were moments of de ja vu, when the same paragraph was used to talk about the "do you regret it" part. Then the timeline of the story, Beginning, cant complain, Middle 95% of the story, ..... End ... blink too slowly and you would miss it all together. I did read this to the end as i did love the story/journey as a whole, and if rewritten a little could be a fantastic book.

Aside from the story plot, this book was so poorly written that I had to say something! I have never read a book with so many errors, it almost made me give up on it. Seriously, do these authors not have editors? For the love of God, take a read through of your book before you publish it!!! It's it cute story, but seriously not worth all the mistakes!!!