Michelle Petrou
This is a poorly written story, unfortunately. It has not targeted a reading level, with the language being used and the concepts in the story being mismatched for young readers. Maybe a rewrite is required. Good luck!
162 people found this review helpful
Argyle Dinosaur
The typos and the questionable grammar were far too distracting while I was trying to read it with my niece. If you can ignore the typos, then the story is okay, but if you have trouble reading typos and choppy flowing sentences, I would pass on this.
48 people found this review helpful