Julie Zingelman
I thought I was going to be reading a book, not a short story. (A short chapter, and that's that!) It had potential but was over before it began. The use of the word "vagina" multiple times in one paragraph kind of ruined it for me, even as a short story. I'm on Samsung galaxy s3, and it was not formatted for my screen. 1 star for these reasons...
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Amy Jo Belcher
In the description when you buy this book, it says 3404 pages, that was a lie. It was a short story, and who wants to pay 4.99 for the next 30 pages, I wanna know more, but it's not worth it. The bundle says even more pages, but who is going to believe that now. Loved the story line, but dissapointed that it's a short story.
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Patricia Bryant Boone
Love the characters and the setting can' t wait to finish the rest of the book only read the sample. Wondering why his wife, which surprise me on the end, cannot have his baby. I'm very interested now .