Jamie coupon
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If I could do a negative rating I would. It's very similar to an another C.
Feehan, w/o her writing style, class or character development . Just
rehashing of her (Ms. Feehan) book(s) poorly.
Grey Amore
ever hear the comments about the twilight books writing? this makes me understand those comments. there are lots of grammar errors, parts that don't flow smoothly. reminds me of a rough draft that wasn't proofed well whwn compared to other published known works. yeah, spelling is there but not much else. is it terrible? no. is it best book ever? far from it. it is okay. wouldn't recommend but a short one paragraph summary would cover it better than reading it. I finished it and can say good idea, needs a good clean up with some filler.
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Abigail Manake
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The writing is bad. Could not finish it & I tried. It really could've been an exciting storyline. So,so bad
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