Street Magic

UPDATE: I've been going around and around with Google support for a week now. They refuse to actually address the problem, or even investigate. Instead they keep claiming it is a browser problem despite my showing it won't work in 4 different browsers on two different operating systems, nor in the app on phones or tablets. Instead they all spout the same empty script about "Sorry you're having problems. Have you tried the same thing you've done dozens of times and reported doesn't work?" Good book--enjoyed reading it. Now Google denies access to it, and refuses to let me open it either in the browser or in the app. Really frustrating because I wanted to re-read the series form the beginning. Still have access to the other books, just not this one. Google has refused to do anything about this.

What I liked: Our story begins with a 16yr old girl the future Pete Caldecott, Detective Inspector of the New Scotland Yard now a grown women. A nightmare that happened over twelve years ago, when Pete had trust in magic and Jack. Jack Winter, a mage was killed by a ghost that they had freed that night. Or so she thought till he appeared to giver her a tip all strung out on heroine. Her world shatters, her heart bleeds from the pain and the joy, of seeing him alive. Jack is a heroine addict. He is also the only one that can help save the children that are being taken. He struggles with his lies, addictions and his own ghosts/demons that follow him. He is forced to take on more darkness and push his magical lines will drive them both to the edge. The magical mystical beings are dark, evil and twisted. The Dark London world is gritty and filled with magical beings Pete is only now opening her eyes to see. She has alway felt something, but her sanity keep her from looking further. They work roughly together, the past dangles between them. She is tough and forces him to go cold turkey with the drugs till this case is solved. Romance ?- There is a hint at something more, between them. Then it is blown away with barely a thought. (i was screaming for something to happen) There was never given a clear feeling on their relationship. No romance here, but there is hope from me. LOL What I did not like: -The writing style started out strong but, at the 1/2 way point it was full of rapid cuts, often leaving me confused. It was like the story was thrown into a tornado. -Pete the rule following detective turned into a fist fighting street girl to defend Jack. -Her whole credibility as a Detective Investigator is unbelievable. She just disappears from her job/superiors during an active missing child case ??? Really ? -the overuse of slang, crude slang. it just didn't fit in that much. ** Despite all of this, I liked Street Magic. It had a lot of confusing and irritating moments in the second half of the book. The characters had serious problems. The writing had some serious flaws, yes. I saw enough promise in the beginning of the book to drive me to read the next one. I have already started the next book. There was brilliant writing at work till the second 1/2 tornado hit.