Varangian: Volume 1

A poorly written story that is over contrived, It lacks basic research and continually misuses language. The characters are empty; the men all of improbable proportions and the women all too beautiful and sex- crazed. Yates should pursue any other talent he has since his ability in writing does not rate highly.

I really enjoyed this book. I liked the writing style, and although there were a few errors which could have been picked up in proof-reading, these were infrequent and did not take away from the enjoyment - a good standard for a free eBook. I like the way the story develops from the viewpoints of different characters. Characters are well constructed and the plot develops at a good pace, with twists and turns encouraging continued reading. The climax at the end does not disappoint. Good descriptive detail for battle scenes, and the steamy bits (this book is quite sexually graphic, but only on occasions and the context does relate and add to the story I feel). I'm not hugely knowledgeable about this era of Byzantine history, but in my opinion the author must have researched the period, figures and events quite thoroughly, and successfully weaves an enjoyable novel around known historical facts, filling in the blanks through well conceived artistic license. A most enjoyable read

great story, unfortunately the sheer amount of spelling mistakes and missing words means it cannot get more than 1 star