Iya Bella
It would have been a lot better for me personally if the grammar and spelling was on point. Interesting storyline, though the visuals and imagination was missing.
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Kendrix Martin
Very good story just got confused with the names. One minute they call her Kayla the Shayla in the next sentence 😕
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Tamika Cornelius
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It was a good short story, leaves a little suspense at the end.
I'm.thinking about buying part two, I just wish it was a bit longer.
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