Nimba and the Seeds

The book can use more explanation and connections. The topic is disconnected with a horrible hook that doesn't draw any attention to desire to read. Once finishing the book it was quite good. But there's a lack of quantity of seeds. What the purpose of the seeds. Lack of the children's book containing words like "I wish...." "I wish...." "I wish...." the purpose of repetition is teaching kids to read and making a purpose for everything no matter how small or how big.

This book isn't as good as the journey of jack but I still encourage you to write so much more with talking creatures and stuff!

Its good make it more longer tho xox