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The numerous grammar and punctuation issues, all of the run on sentences and the continued use of the main character's full name made me put this book down a third of the way through. Having what seemed like a plot written by a seventh grade student want helping either. Sorry, but this one's a miss.
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Cameron Knox (Knoxy_in_Oz)
Honestly I couldn't read this. Constantly referring to the lead character by his full name "Anthony Stone" when all other characters are either referred to by their first names or titles. It's forced in the way a good editor should have stopped. The story itself seemed too flimsy to get itself out of chapter 3. Which is where I stopped.
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Tina Kalliola
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The author is writing the characters names again & again & again & again..you get the picture. It drove me nuts. If I didn't have to put up with that, I may have read more than 3 pages. Seriously, what author believes they have ro write the name of the character before or after every single action & thought
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