His Dirty Secret

I think that some of you"authors" with a little more education, a dictionary, and a thorough proof reader... you all could possibly be respected as real writers. Some of the stories we're interesting...but having to buy these cheesy books over and over just to get the whole story... you guys are scammers, not writers! P

Story was unique and interesting in the beginning but turned bland and predictable very quickly. I wasn't expecting his secret to be something so cliche and overused. The story lost touch of it's element. It doesn't utilize the other characters such as keon or Michael. It completely abandons other characters to focus on Darius and Jayla which made the story feel very one-dimensional. All in all, it was a good read, for a free book. I do plan on reading the rest of the series, hopefully they'll be better.

Very short and predictable. Read the book in less than an hour. It was mostly about the introduction of the characters. These are one of those "too good to be true" stories. A hood version of cinderella finding her prince charming but turns out to be nothing but a lying cheater. I can predict that the next story she will leave but will return after he buys her expensive gifts and then he will become a monster. I can also see a possible fallout with her friends, maybe one of them will be killed, or betray her? I'm sorry but I'm not impressed enough to read the series.