I Stephenson
Although I understand the main character's need to give back to others etc., I did not like the development of the character and focus on her anxiety attacks ( although it is a realistic view of how someone who suffers from GAD likely thinks) detracts from the storyline. Additionally, the author focuses on inconsequential details and this makes the story develop slowly. I chose this book because it was Christian fiction, but I'm struggling to complete it ( partly due to all the punctuation errors and words that are clumped together) . The main character's relationship with God is admirable and she maintained her values throughout her period of dating Bo. Overall, the story is OK, but definitely not great.
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Alexandra Hernandez
I really like the combination of excitement, romance, emotional, etc. The only problem is that many times there were parts had grammar issues and I found it hard to understand what I read.